Storyline (FIX) (25%)

[Oathkeeper]

A certain figure (I already know who it's going to be) has fused heartless and nobodies together to create something called The Emptiness...these creatures are very strong and very quick they even are quite smart they dont follow anyones orders but there masters, and unfortunately the master has figured out a way to mass produce this...emptinesss and they have spread through out the world.

The worst part is they can even use and steal keyblades from there master...except for the chosen one in sora however we havnt the slightest clue where he is...we must search for him find him...and have him help us search for a world kept secret from everyone...a myth has it...that the name of this world is The World of the lost forever

(feedback/add ideas please)

[tedni]

Um, Ok, you could say why we need to find the World of the Lost Forever... Is there some sort of great power there?

You could say something about how the emptiness can affect worlds.

You could say why we don't know where Sora and his companions are.

You could state how we would go about locating Sora.

You could talk about why Organization XIII are back.

You could explain how certain worlds have escaped the emptiness.

You can tell us just what the master of the emptiness wants.

You could talk about how the Disney characters, or any of the people Sora met, have tried to form a resistance force.

You can explain just what has happened to worlds touched by the emptiness.

Aaaaand, thats me done. Hope this helps =)